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Rare Apple by JunglePony Rare Apple by JunglePony
Are you ready for the apple Sugarcube :iconapplejackisplzedplz:



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This version does not include panties on Rarity:3 . I will post all other versions by the end of tomorrow I hope.

Finally:
Wallpaper cute face version [link]
Panties and Stockings version [link]
Alpha Channel [link] :3
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As of the last critique, I will try to cover three main points. The bad, the good, and my personal opinion.

THE BAD: (FIRST LOOK/ MORALY WRONG)
Even though your resent art has not been as bashed as the Pinkie debet, some points should be accounted for that may arise regardless.
This image my be labeled by others as either of the following: Rule-34, Porn, Bestiality, bondage and/ or child-porn.
Another thing that could be mentioned by others in the near future is possibly the lack of at least a warning label.
This image may also be under attack by those who will find this disgraceful to the show (My Little Pony: Friendship is magic) and its fan-base (Bronies).
This is also categorized as "High Saucy" due to the fact that not only do they have socks, but also panties. An argument to arise is that someone may note it as wrong as animals are not to be wearing clothing in such manner. With that in mind, it also suggests specific part on there bodys, potentially causing uneasiness or discomfort by what one might see from this.


THE GOOD: (ARTISTIC)
You have been told many a time, but once more, this is a good piece of art
To start, the colors fit well with the image. Nothing seems to distracting from the main focal point. No color seem to dominate over another.
Due to that, a good Balance is achieved. the wight is centered and does not seem to drift either to the left or right.
The lines are clean, and it is of the sows quality, or style if you may.
the designs of there clothing seem appropriate and are still simplistic in a way.


MY OPINION:
First look at this, i noticed how more sexual it was. especially by adding bondage to this and how Apple Jack is getting into it. Its not bad, but i can see trolls or a bit of dislike over this, so dont be surprised when it happens, because it will happen.
One thing i like are the designs of there clothing. The Apples on Apple Jacks socks were a good choice VS. a solid color. And I like what you did with rarity's socks. looks like the design I did for my Rarity one ( [link] ). One thing that does bother me is her waist region. I like the belt, But it looks as though she is not wearing any panties. Are they white so we cant see them, or did you leave them out. I dont know. As for one more thing about the clothing, look the bow around Rarity's neck. Its adorable on her.
as for the faces, i love them. Apple Jacks shows how she wants it, but at the same time wants to be gental about it. For rarity, she seems like a boarder line between "does not want" to "give it to me darling". what makes this image, to me, is Rarity's face. Its so adorable, especially with her eyes. As cute as it is, I do see a bit of a younger appearance in her now. As said in the last critique, Its better to have there faces more at a 3/4 view to give an older appearance, however, those who watch the show will know that they are (or act) of at least ages of 18-19. So i dont think that will be too much of an issue.
Over all, its not bad. Not the top of my list, but its not bad. Its cute, its hot, and might be considered either soft core porn, but maybe not quite as NSFW.


VISION:
I'll give you a full 5 stares for this. The image is of high quality and is very clean in terms of design, color and line usage.


ORIGINALITY:
You will get 4 stares from me.
- The first 3 come from the fact that this is a Saucy image (involving socks). seeing how this has been done before, you get 3.
- you get .5 stars extra for adding panties. that now makes this "high Sauce". and sense most artist would rather not do it, it adds more originality.
- you also get another .5 stares for adding the whole ribbion thing. Adds a bondage element, and for some reason, i kinda see Rarity being the type that would enjoy some kind of restraint.


TECHNIQUE:
You shall receive 4.5 stars from me. As good as it is, there where some minor things i noticed that could be approved (like Rarities crouch area for example. dont know if panties are there, or if she "free balling" in a sense).


IMPACT:
I'll give you 4 stares. Not my top favorite, but there are still things i enjoy from it. design, colors and facial expressions. also, i'm 50/ 50 on this ship. it seems like it would not work for them, but at the same time they are opposites and would seem right for them to be together.


This is my review. of course my opinions are up for debet, but i think i did good. The importent thing is that i tried and hope you can agree on some points.

Thank you for you time and have a nice day ^_^
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This is a truly amazing piece of RariJack work, a shipping that is actually not as common as one would think. The design/vision is absolutely perfect, with not a single detail out of place. The incorporation of bondage in it gives it a saucy, hot sort of feel, while the expressions on their faces give it an adorable counterpart. The panties and socks also counteract in a positive way, the panties adding more sexuality, while the socks give it more of a romantic, warm feel. And even then, each of them have their own which sticks to their personalities/designs. Another thing I think is portrayed well is their relationship together. There seems to be an obvious submissive/dominant situation, Applejack being dominant, but not to the point of BDSM, but more to the area of playfulness. To wrap things up...I would honestly have to say that this is one of, if not the best, piece of RariJack work I have ever seen.
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Cezaryy Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I found that someone recolored it and show as his work. Did you allowed someone to recolor it/change a little?
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:iconthe-ship-elsanna:
i approve .....Clapping Pony Icon - Rainbow Dash Clapping Pony Icon - Fluttershy Clapping Pony Icon - Pinkie Pie Clapping Pony Icon - Twilight Sparkle ....................MLP:Evil fluttershy 
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Zipperozic Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015
I actually screamed at that flutter shy gif and was laughing at it at the same time so it sounded like moans of pleasure. Dance Shet.
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the-ship-elsanna Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015
Llama Emoji-56 (Hiding) [V3] 
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CptHax Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Student Photographer
oh wtf is this
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PonyOgreload Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014
er erm... {i shiiip iiitt}
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Zipperozic Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
HUEHGHGG :projectilevomit: 
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bombard423 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
HOLY SHIT! Dude, you're pissing and shitting out of your mouth at the same time! That's gonna be a viral video! La la la la 
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dingosnivysprint12 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Nice :D
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TDLOVA Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Rarity's face doe
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Sweet-karem Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
oh....
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darknessthehedgehog3 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
one word hooooooot! this just made rarity a new favorite 
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coolmanjonathan1234 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
Applejack's Tasting MARSHMELLOWS Hot choclate 
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Mad42Hatter Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
I'm not against a little sexy fun, believe me, but really, Rarity; using the necklace with the Fire Ruby Spkie gave you as underwear while doing somepony else? That's just tactless.
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JackVolt Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sliirp :3Clannad Dango (Love) [V1] 
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TheDevinGreat Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
:iconapplejackisplzedplz:
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TheDevinGreat Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
In my opinion. This is the best picture I've ever seen existing the internet! :D (Big Grin) Bear Emoji-08 (Rolling Love) [V1] 
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Deadmau5Nstuff Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
me:....*gets a baseball and a baseball bat*
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marizmar123 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
ahaha
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ninllot Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
llega a ser hermoso
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Maestro666 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
THANK YOU for made this wonderfull art. Rarijack needs more art like this ! With this Quality and Impact ! OMG MOAR POEMS!
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Jlun2 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
Nice, but why do I keep thinking it should be Applejack all tied up and beaten up with Rarity laughing manically sadistically in joy?
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the3dgameboy97 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist
Applejack is SO lucky!!
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MysteriousBrony Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
I just love Rarity's facial epxpression! And Applejack is really gentle here. Amazing work!
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rosefoxy Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
hola a todos, estaba navegando por un foro de mlp cuando me encontre a un monton de shiperos discutiendo altas cuestiones filosoficas sobre que pony esta enamora de quien y de cual es el mejor shiping, ay joder si todas las ponies son asexuales(menos rarity). y solo les importa la amistad. por eso hoy voy a hablarles de los shiping ┐que co˝o es eso? los shiping son las fantasias sexuales de los fans que como estan muy pendejos para tener novio o novia de verdad (o solo les gusta exitarse con el yaoi yuri o lo que sea para mojarse o ponerse duros) pasan un 90 por ciento de su tiempo emparejando personajes que no tienen nada que ver. el resto se la pasan en foros subiendo fanarts y fics del averno y discutiendo que su pareja es verdadera y la unica existente en toda la serie. toda serie, anime, pelicula, videojuego, libro y caricatura tienen esta plaga entre sus fans desde los que emparejan a los protagonistas asta los enfermos que transforman a los personajes en seres que solo piensan en sexo de manera de ligarse a un personaje relevante, mlp es de las series que mas a sufrido en esta cuestion debido a una serie de elementos que e visto a continuacion. a) como no tiene romance los fanboys sienten una psycopata necesidad de meterlo a huevo. b) la serie esta llena de personajes explotables. c) no ay mucha linealidad en la serie a si que los fans se danla tarea de hacer historias que segun complementan los huecos pero que no son mas que sus fantasias sexuales reprimidas. sia un no me cren basta con buscar la lista de nombres de shiping y la mayoria nisiquera tienen sentido como estos: dashxflutershy, dashxapple jack, dashxpinkie pie,dashxscotaloo, dashxsoarin, dasxtwiligh(uy esa dash si que la trae con todos) lunaxtwiligh,twilighxtrixie,spikexrarity,spikextwiligh,spikexaplebloom y mas de 8000 shipings pateticos y stupidos. pero el verdadero festin de estupides no esta en los shipings si no en los argumentos que dan la mayoria de ellos para justificar sus gustos como si se tratara de alguna ideologia polotica o religiosa. para ellos cualquier cosa es una prueba irrefutable de que existe el amor verdadero entre su parejita. los argumentos son casi siempre los mismos sin importar de que siping se hable. en el episodio x ellos pasaron mucho tiempo jontos. claro si tu tienes un mejor amigo y no estas enamorado de el no debes pasar mucho tiempo con el. en otro capitulo se quedaron tres segundos viendose seguro para contemplar su bellesa. que mamadas. se preocupo por el en un episodio. o si claro si tienes un amigo y no estas enamorado de el entoces no tienes derecho a preocuparte por el. fueron rivales en un capitulo. sepan que parte de la amistad es peliar (ademas que ese tipo de argumento parece sacado de naruto )cualquer frase domingera la toman como una declaracion indiscreta( como la de flutershy no es un arbol bobita) tabien creen que si un pony se acerca mucho a otro ya son pareja. dios mio, podria seguir hablando pero me da flojera, al final cada quen lo que quiera pero ver una serie con el unico fin de andar aciendo parejas a lo pendejo y chillar por que los productores no hicieron de la serie un melodrama cursi y quejarse por ello es patetico y absurdo abiendo de animes y series romanticas de verdad.
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Schrabbel Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Even though im not a fan of RaryJack (i neither can imagine these two being together nor Rarity being with another mare. Plus i'm an AppleDash Fan :3 ) but this pic is really cute and downright adorable :) .
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DavionX Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
i dont know why, but i like this one. so rarity like to get tied up, nice to know, her look is priceless.
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MagicDashie Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
:iconmegustaplz:
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bipole Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hope you don't mind if I send it out for publishing
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JunglePony Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nope not at all ^^
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motor-cunt Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am not good at writing critiques, cos I some times can't find the correct words, but any way I just love this pic, 7 stars for u!
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AsiDeIlogica Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student Artist
OH, esto ya es demasiado.
Como manchan la imagen de los ponys...
No insulto por que si no me matan a palos, pero si pudiera...

POOR APPLEJACK AND POOR RARITY. POOR LAUREN FAUST. POOR AL THE STAFF OF MY LITTLE PONY. Por que ellos crearon esto y ahora lo estan MATANDO con imagenes eroticas ...
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Tapoff Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Tienes razon, pero porque escribiste tu comentario en espanol pero hay tres frases en ingles?
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AsiDeIlogica Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student Artist
Para que entiendan lo esencial.
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BoneSatellite Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
I dislike Rarity shipping for obvious reasons, yet most of the artwork and fiction is marvelous, like this one. Very frustrating.

[Spike enters, stands shocked]
Rarity: "Oh, Spikey-Wikey, I'm so glad you're here!"
AJ: "We sure are." [trots over to Spike, ties him up, stretches him across Rarity's stomach, straddles both.] ":heart:Now ... where were we? :heart:"
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mlp1fim Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
dislike Rarity shipping for obvious reasons? what reasons?
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BoneSatellite Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
Only when Rarity goes after another pony without giving much thought to how she'll be hurting Spike. If an author covers that, though, I'm all for it.
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mlp1fim Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
Oww yeah i always forget that point.... i hope people clarify that matter on s3
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sndi12345 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
HOLY APPLES IN A BUCKET THAT'S REALLY HOT.
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Nightfire3024 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student Writer
Damn! 0__0
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Menace99 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OH no rule 34 it's spreading
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HaloAskew Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
It's like AJ, Rarity, and Twilight decided to have another slumber party after the first near-disastrous one, but Twi insisted on doing it "the right way" by including experimentation with lesbianism (like the slumber party episode of The Big Bang Theory). And it turned out to be THE BEST NIGHT EVER for RariJack. (Twi was content to immerse herself in a good book while they played.)

Seriously, you draw some fantastic soft-core ponyrotica. My hat is off to you.
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JunglePony Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank You ^^
To me Rarity either goes with Applejack or Spike, and Applejack with Rarity or Rainbow Dash lol
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pokemaster2185 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
I personally find Rarity/Fluttershy cute, though I am curious if you'll ever draw Rarity with Spike. AJ/RD are pretty much a given, though.
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JunglePony Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeup Rarity/Fluttershy is cute, and Shipping main six is always cute xD
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J25TheArcKing Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My god, just beautiful art...
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SilverWing15 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwwwwwww ya no I gues they do make a good cuple
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Ca11m3Raven Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Student Artist
Rarity looks so happy to be there
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FictionPony Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Woah... I don't normally dig the saucy stuff but this is so well drawn I can't help but love it! Rarity's expression is incredible! Great work!
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Ragnarokia Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Rarity seems new to it, but is enjoying it. Her eyes are adorable.
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