Alright, I'm better now. Lets get down the business, first off, vision. I know this is kinda sorta supposed to be a somewhat "Erotic" picture, but I'm not feeling it. Sweetie is acting playful and cute, not really erotic Per Se. Thats NOT a bad thing btw, nswf is good an all, but sometimes a brony needs a good palate cleanser. Now for originality, EXCELLENT! I don't think I've ever seen Sweetie Belle like this! (Not that I look for her, but still) Technique, again, excellent, you're true to how she looks in the show and yet add your own touch, like the fluffy fur. Impact, I don't really go by this since art is personal, so I rated 5 stars. Overall, a superb piece of art!
Havent done one of these for you in a while... or in general... ON WITH THIS CRITIQUE!
VISION:
For this, you get the full 5 out of 5 from me. WHY!? because its look at it. The lines are clean. The colors are properly used, and there is enough shading with out overdoing is. Its enough to give this that 3D pop. Much like what I try to do in my arts. the use of lines are used well too. Just by looking at this, you can see the softness from mane and coat. It just makes me want to give her a belly rub, or just give her a nice big hug :3
ORIGINALITY:
for this, only 3.5 out of 5. Not the most Original. She has been drawn in subjective/ adorable poses before. Not much with her and a bed, so you get a little extra for that. But it's nice to see this.
TECHNIQUE:
Can't think of what this means, other then the way the artist creates a piece. you get 5 out of 5 from me for this one. What ever your process (though based on the images i'v seen, it looks a lot like my process), it's working for you. keep it up!
IMPACT:
There are two ratings you get from me (but the higher one is what I put down).
First rating is 4 out of 5. Of how you have drawn her, though subjective, She still retains adorableness that makes me want cuddle with soft things. or even brush her mane. she is just one ball of cute and softness.
Second rating gets you 4.5 out 5. this is with the extra your other version has on you "FimFan Tumbler". Saw it, and even with the extra's, It holds more innocence or playfulness. would give it a 5 if She was older, But deduct a bit for her assumed age. But with how she is stretched out her, It seems that she has more age behind her, making it a little better.
OVERALL OPINION:
Don't know why, but I prefer your uncencered version. It may be NSFW, but its good NSFW. The uncencered version is just as good, but loses feeling with the intended pose given in front of me. non the less, A very well done piece or art. this is also my favorite CMC related image done by you so far. hope to see more from you soon :3
This is cute, but she's a fucking child. That's just messed up. Put Rainbow Dash or some other pony there- just not the fillies. Dear god, not the fillies.
SHE'S SO FLUFFEH~ ERMAGERD SO CUTE~
Alright, I'm better now.
Lets get down the business, first off, vision. I know this is kinda sorta supposed to be a somewhat "Erotic" picture, but I'm not feeling it. Sweetie is acting playful and cute, not really erotic Per Se. Thats NOT a bad thing btw, nswf is good an all, but sometimes a brony needs a good palate cleanser.
Now for originality, EXCELLENT! I don't think I've ever seen Sweetie Belle like this! (Not that I look for her, but still)
Technique, again, excellent, you're true to how she looks in the show and yet add your own touch, like the fluffy fur.
Impact, I don't really go by this since art is personal, so I rated 5 stars.
Overall, a superb piece of art!
VISION:
For this, you get the full 5 out of 5 from me. WHY!? because its look at it. The lines are clean. The colors are properly used, and there is enough shading with out overdoing is. Its enough to give this that 3D pop. Much like what I try to do in my arts. the use of lines are used well too. Just by looking at this, you can see the softness from mane and coat. It just makes me want to give her a belly rub, or just give her a nice big hug :3
ORIGINALITY:
for this, only 3.5 out of 5. Not the most Original. She has been drawn in subjective/ adorable poses before. Not much with her and a bed, so you get a little extra for that. But it's nice to see this.
TECHNIQUE:
Can't think of what this means, other then the way the artist creates a piece. you get 5 out of 5 from me for this one. What ever your process (though based on the images i'v seen, it looks a lot like my process), it's working for you. keep it up!
IMPACT:
There are two ratings you get from me (but the higher one is what I put down).
First rating is 4 out of 5. Of how you have drawn her, though subjective, She still retains adorableness that makes me want cuddle with soft things. or even brush her mane. she is just one ball of cute and softness.
Second rating gets you 4.5 out 5. this is with the extra your other version has on you "FimFan Tumbler". Saw it, and even with the extra's, It holds more innocence or playfulness. would give it a 5 if She was older, But deduct a bit for her assumed age. But with how she is stretched out her, It seems that she has more age behind her, making it a little better.
OVERALL OPINION:
Don't know why, but I prefer your uncencered version. It may be NSFW, but its good NSFW. The uncencered version is just as good, but loses feeling with the intended pose given in front of me. non the less, A very well done piece or art. this is also my favorite CMC related image done by you so far. hope to see more from you soon :3
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