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TwiLuna by JunglePony TwiLuna by JunglePony
I guess that walking on clouds spell has some use after all :3
Which skies shall I choose, canon stile or my stile? decisions decisions.

A bit more canon stile: [link]
Alpha channel: [link]
Moonless version plus PSD download

Gotta do more Luna cos shes the best pony <3
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:icondiskens:
Once again, we're here to do a small critique about Junglepony's work!
Anyway let's begin!

Vision:
I find the pose of the characters quite nice. The two ponies, Princess Luna and Twilight Sparkle, are caught in the middle on a tender kiss under the moonlight. It is a really nice pair to ship! The socks they both wear are a additional touch to the saucy scene.

Originality:
I'd say there is not much TwilightXLuna pics, so it's really original. Twilight Sparkle was one of the only ponies to stay awake at night to admire the stars, which make her quite a good one to have Luna's favors... Despite the fact that your name is associated with kinky ponies, you once again found a way to ship ponies in an original way.

Technique:
Like I said in another critique, your style is that great that it looks really like it was taken straight from the show. The character design is almost the same as in the official MLP TV show. The eyebrows, the colors, the shades are exactly what we could expect from an expert artist!
Special mention for Luna's mane, made of stars and a night-sky. It's the only thing slightly different from the show, but far much better this way. Even for the cloud, we could almost feel it's softness under their hooves.

Impact:
Once again, the emotional impact is really strong here. While the other pics were more about pure "kinkyness", I find this one more about expressing long-time hidden emotions. They were forced to hide their feelings, as nopony would accept it... The only way they had to meet was at night, on a remote cloud, quite romantic I think

That's all for that critique, hope you'll find it fair! If not... Sorry for having you read this!
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Critique by ~pokemaster2185 22 minutes ago
This pic almost seems like it could be a continuation of the previous Twiluna pic. They've taken up residence on their own little cloud in the middle of the night for some nice loving alone-time.

Between the pose and the kiss, this does an amazing job conveying the passion between Twilight and Luna. The position of Luna's left foreleg makes it seem like she's getting ready to take things further than just kissing. The way Twilight's tail is positioned and how messy her hair is implies that she was pushed down suddenly. The stockings as always make them adorable, and I see Twilight is indeed wearing the same panties as in your previous pic. Looks like Luna appreciated Twilight's gesture.

Nice little nod with remembering the cloud-walking spell from Sonic Rainboom. It would have been a bit of a complaint until I remembered that, and that you mentioned it in the pic description.
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:iconruaken:
Burrrrr shipping whatever. Very well done, to be sure.
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HaloRecons12 Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
The Moon and the Stars are the only two common things that appear in the night sky.   Don't ask how I came up with that, lol.  Nice work, though.
 
- Revy
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:iconthearticfox:
Luna?..L-Luna, wat r u doin?LUNA STAHP
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:iconsuffering1990:
:iconholycrapwrightplz::iconsaysplz: HOLLY MOTHER OF HELL!!!
:iconedgeygahplz::iconsaysplz: NO WAY!!!
:iconobjection1plz::iconobjection2plz::iconobjection3plz:
:iconobjection4plz::iconobjection5plz::iconobjection6plz: X2
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HaloRecons12 Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
lmfao
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:icongothguru:
Twilight spending quality time with her great, great, great, grand ma. :D
Beautiful artwork.
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:iconmusicpony882:
no. no. no. luna is better then this.
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:iconprototype223:
Now I wish I was Twilight in that picture
Wat, making out with Luna (if I was a stallion) would be awesome
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:iconmanithmagesinger:
A friend of mine sent me this pic, and I fell in love, this is the pic that got me interested in your art, and I personally love the whole stockings thing, im so glad it's kind of the theme of your art, just fantastic, keep up the good work.
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:iconprototype223:
if u are fapping or clopping or whatever the hell u call it: YOU WILL DIE!
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